First Web Design

Started by [Zero], Dec 24, 2009, 04:19 AM

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[Zero]

Let me know what you guys think. I'm not a very creative person so I'm trying to improve my creativity by trying to design some websites. Constructive criticism would be appreciated :)

Khaine

its good for your first template /no1
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rj

Yes, it is really nice if its your first. You just need to add more details.. Simple but nice..

Shiryu

I don't have much time atm, so here's a short review:

Your designs need work. They are getting better, but they definately need work. Keep it up, in time you'll create beautiful designs.

8/10 ;)


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Lucian

Very nice for a first try, defiantly would beat out mine if I learned how to make sites.

Yukino

It's a very nice and clean design. It might look kind of... short though? Some fonts on the bottoms at the side can be better.
Good job with it!
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thelonite

two thumbs up
its good
need a little more spice though
but its good ^^

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Spirited Soul

thats nice for your 1st design.

LemonCrosswalk

Welcome to more than a month ago.

As for the site, it's fine but it seems to lack flow. All the pieces look like pieces instead of a single website.

Cyric

Looks great for a first time out. Keeping going and always keep and open mind to critiquing. There is always high demand for great work.
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MightyFace

Zero contact me if you need a job :P   [email protected]

Cyric

See, there you go Zero. A job offer. Keep up the great work! Oh, and feel free to post your stuff on this topic i created a while back. It will help give your stuff some exposure as well... http://www.ratemyserver.net/forum/index.php/topic,11518.msg102545.html#msg102545
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Roan

Looks great for your first work, keep it up and i can only imagine what you could come up with  8)

DarkDevine

I don't really like it, it looks far too unprofessional, the effects are like basic photoshop filters where you didn't even edit the properties of the effects, like the colors of the dropped shadow etc.
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Tande

Sometimes I wish people wouldn't use default RO pictures and explore a bit more.

It's fairly...the same as every other first layout everyone else has made.  Explore, adventure into more colours, and live a little!
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LemonCrosswalk

90% of people can't draw to save their lives.

Tande

But there are image search engines.
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