my latest commissioned ragnarok video advertisement

[Oryhpes]

hi anyone please rate my ragnarok video creativity. i made this video.
i'm curious how would viewers respond or think when they see such ragnarok advertisement.

what should be edited and removed.
please leave comment down below.

here's the link
[note: im not here to advertise the server]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-a0ekqs6Kpo&feature=youtu.be

if you wish to ask question or message me in my facebook account here's the link
https://www.facebook.com/ROEditing/

[Kaleidoscope]

The video is pretty decent! Looks like there didn't have much content to showcase which can make it difficult. I would also choose different words in the beginning. "never seen before", is uhhh not true. There have been quitea few SHR with almost exactly playstyles. Your skills are pretty good though +1